I detect some Mike Patton, Br. Bungle/Fantomas influence in your work. I love the limping feel of it, and the crazy drum fills. Excellent and refreshing al all counts!
Mr. Bungle! I never realized it came through in my own stuff. That's cool. Thanks.
Don't think it needs anything
For the purposes of using this as a soundtrack, this fits the bill perfectly. As for the repetition, hey, it's speed metal. Repetition is its cornerstone. Just get some throaty lyrics and you've got a hit!
Really great composition! Love the crunchy bass and drums. I really liked that guitar melody at 00:30 and kinda wished it was worked into the rest of the piece more. That little 8-bit loop is very catchy.
I'm seeing the clown from Live at the Apollo run out on stage and murder a bad comedian with a chainsaw. Very vivid.
Just needs to tighten up.
Sounds to me that it's the drums that are off, which should be easier to tighten up. Nice playing. I think you could work a very interesting bass line into it.
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